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Sunday, March 17, 2013

Cool Relief


We were removing shoes
without a moment to lose
Enjoying soft moist sand

A hot summer day
Sweat like bugs crawl down the cheeks
Cool water we seek

The water beckons
Like a forbidden secret
Waiting to be shared
Soon it will be warm again and we will be able to enjoy the cool refreshing water on bare feet. We (my sister and I) grew up with a creek in our backyard and we enjoyed many hot days wading through it spreading toes in soft moss and sand. 

This post linked to Carpe diem. Enjoy the haikus spun from the challenge provided by Kristjaan Panneman.
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Colette S March 17, 2013 at 7:32 PM  

Oh yes I remember that feeling all too well last summer.
I know it will come again! I shall enjoy the water, even in a bucket!

Colette S March 17, 2013 at 7:32 PM  

Very nice poem Judy.

theeclecticeccentricshopaholic March 17, 2013 at 9:12 PM  

i really enjoyed that first haiku :) but all so wonderfully written

betchai March 17, 2013 at 11:23 PM  

lovely composition as always Judy, both picture and words.

~✽Mumsy✽~ March 18, 2013 at 5:49 AM  

Fabulous poem, and I can't wait to feel the sun on my skin!

Kristjaan Panneman March 18, 2013 at 8:18 AM  

Lovely series of haiku Judy. I like the way you have used your childhood memories in it and have brought those together with our Special of today. The last (3rd) is my favorite it has a lot of deeper layers and spirituality enclosed in it.

wabisabipoet March 18, 2013 at 12:19 PM  

a forbidden secret - how enticing!! Lovely haiku!


Adriana Dascalu March 18, 2013 at 12:41 PM  

how I wish for spring! beautiful haiku!

Brudberg March 18, 2013 at 2:17 PM  

ah what a wonderful feeling in this set of haiku

kulasa zen March 19, 2013 at 8:17 AM  

spreading toes in soft moss and sand...that I most certainly love to do too! love the haiku, so beautifully written...makes me want to go to a creek now and wet these feet :)

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